I'm now 367 pages into the second draft, which is 12 pages since the last update. Yet, another week where I struggled to hit the minimum and only hit it just before writing this update. I might take a break from writing this week because my gaming subscription is ending soon and I want to make the most of it. If I do write something but I don't hit the minimum, then I will make another update per usual. For the outline, I reached page 19. There's a battle later on that I'm planning on cutting because it is a repeat of a bigger battle I plan to do later on. Like think of the Battle of Kabul in AP2 where everyone got separated. The battle I'm cutting is a condensed version of that. I don't want to repeat the whole everyone getting separated multiple times. Besides, the book already has a lot of intense battles in it, so it won't be so bad if I cut one out. It's not like I'm writing one of those books that promise action but barely delivers on it.
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